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"Rosemary be careful. I won't be here to protect you know." Warned a young man with dark purple locks of hair that hung loosely in his face.
"I know, Daniel." A teenaged girl huffed as she let her midnight blue hair cling onto the sides of her face. "I'm a big girl now. You have given me this lecture before."
The young man sighed and shook his head, "Rosy, my sweet little sister, don't get into trouble and please stay wary of Chris. I don't want you two hanging out together anymore."
The girl pouted and glared at her older brother, "Yeah yeah. I know." He smiled and kissed her forehead.
"I'll be back before you know it, sisi." He stated calmly with a small smile on his face before turning away from her and leaving. The girl watched as her older brother left. Her heart pleaded for him to be safe and to return home alive.
"Oi broad!" Shouted out a masculine voice. Rosemary turned her gaze to the new comer. A man with dark crimson red hair came running towards her. The man only wore a simple white wife beater and black skinny jeans.
"Hello, Chris." She greeted as a light blush graced her features. The man smirked at the girl and gently patted her cheek.
"How bout we go train, broad?" He asked nonchalantly as his smirk grew. Rosemary only nodded her head in agreement, since she couldn't find her voice. "Great I'll meet you at the training arena in ten minutes. Don't be late, love."
Rosemary sighed in a dreamily way as she watched Chris walk away to get ready to train. She shook herself out of her trance and forced herself to go up stairs and dress into her training apparel. Her normal training apparel consist of a strapless black dress, that has slits on the sides so she could move her legs easily, with a bandage wrapping around her waist. She slipped on her black sandals and quickly tied her long dark blue hair out of her face. She smiled and quickly pack four water bottles and two lunches, one for her and one for Chris. Then she bolted out the door.
"Oi stupid broad where you going?" Laughed her idiotic bestfriend, Jake. Rosemary halted and playfully glared at him.
She shifted her hip to one side and grinned, "I'm going to go train with your brother! Bye!" She answered before taking off again.
Jake chuckled to himself, "That broad is definitely whipped."
Rosemary stopped and straighten herself up before making her presence known to Chris, who was stretching for their training session.
"Hi Chris." She shyly greeted as a blush appeared on her cheeks again. Chris turned and smiled at her.
"Hey, love." He greeted back as he winked at the poor blushing cougar girl. Rosemary's eyes widened when she notice he was only training in shorts. "Like what ya see."
"Eep!" Rosemary quickly covered her baby blue eyes. "Ah my poor virgin eyes!!" Chris laughed and shook his head.
"Quick your complainin' ya know you love it, broad." Rosemary's blushed deepened when he stated that.
"Um... Chris are we training in our anthro form or full animal form?" She asked, still shielding her eyes from his shirtless chest.
"Anthro." Was his answer. Rosemary nodded and began to transform. Her pupils thinned out and resembled that of a cat. Two semi-furry brown ears stuck out on the top of her head, which replaced her normal ears. Her nose slightly stuck out to resemble that of a cougars. Her hands transformed into paws of a cougar as her feet went through a similar transformation. And last but not least a long beige tail stuck out from under her dress. Chris, who was already in his anthro wolf form, which was basically what humans call werewolves, whistled at her transformation. She had definitely mature since the last time they had trained.
"Looking good for a fifteen year old, broad." Chris teased.
"T-thanks." She muttered as she pressed her index fingers together in an embarrass way. "You pedophile."
"I hope you are not hitting on my apprentice, Mr. Adams." A stern stark voice growled. Out of the shadows stepped a woman with long dirty blonde hair. She wore a simple blue cloak and a mask that only showed her left eye.
Chris gulped, "No, E-elder Yūbi. I wouldn't hit on girls younger than me. Especially your apprentice." He slowly turned back into his human form. The woman smirked slightly and looked at Rosemary with her good eye.
"Evans the council requests a hearing from you. Please come with me." Yūbi stated as she walked away.
"Oh. We'll train another time, Chris. I promise!" Rosemary squeaked as she took off after her master. Chris sighed and glared at the floor. That damn woman had to interrupt their training before things got interesting.
"Damn, Elder." He muttered as he left to find his younger brother.
"Elder Yūbi and apprentice Rosemary Evans. You've been called here on important business." One of the council members stated in a monotone.
"And that is?" Yūbi asked with a monotone.
"This war between the Human Nation and ours has been going on too long." One of the female council members stated.
"And we and the humans decided to sign a peace treaty, but the humans demanded that one of us go with them as a slave for the prince of the nation. If they are to sign the treaty and in return they will trade their goods with us." Another member stated. Rosemary stiffened, knowing exactly where this issue was heading.
"We decided that you will be the one Rosemary. It's nothing personal, but you are young and strong. You will make a fine offering." The another female member quickly explained. Yūbi stood up suddenly, her killing intent was sky rocketing and made everyone in the room shiver with fear of the fairy warrior.
"I don't agree with your decision, council members." She spat out venomously. The council members sighed and shook their heads.
"Elder Shi no Yūbi, we all know you have no power over our decision unless there are more elders supporting you. But sadly luck isn't on your side, since all the other elders are off leading the war." Laughed one of the male members.
"You are not permitted to do this." Yūbi growled. Rosemary stood up abruptly and placed a hand on her Master's shoulder.
"Master please. The council has made their decision. If I am to serve our great nation by becoming a slave the so shall it be." The teenage girl firmly stated. The blonde hair fairy only sighed in defeat and sat down.
"For being over a hundred years old, you are quite immature, Shi. Your student shows more maturity than you." Sneered a female member. Yūbi just glared at the woman and didn't utter a word.
The eldest council member cleared his throat, "Miss Evans you are to report home and change into something more appealing for your new masters." Rosemary nodded. "And with no further distractions, this meeting is over. You two are dismissed." Yūbi stood and walked out of the room without a word while Rosemary bowed to the members and followed after her master.
Here's the first Chapter of Rosemary's story. The story will be about 15 chapters long.
Basically, The anthro nation, where Rosemary lives, is in war with the human nation. Rosemary is basically been offered to the humans to stop the war. Of course no one is there to stop the councils decision, even Elder Yūbi couldn't unless she has the help of the other Elders. But sadly the others are at war.
Hope you enjoy
Yūbi, Chris©Bri
Rosemary, Jake, Daniel©Me
Story plot was created by Bri and I
Basically, The anthro nation, where Rosemary lives, is in war with the human nation. Rosemary is basically been offered to the humans to stop the war. Of course no one is there to stop the councils decision, even Elder Yūbi couldn't unless she has the help of the other Elders. But sadly the others are at war.
Hope you enjoy
Yūbi, Chris©Bri
Rosemary, Jake, Daniel©Me
Story plot was created by Bri and I
© 2012 - 2024 Rose-The-Demon
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Erm, I do believe this is the story you mentioned? I mean, the problem that I find with almost every story on DeviantART is that: They're on DeviantART. It's nigh impossible to write a decent story on here, due to the fact that they limit your file size down.
Take Brave new world, for example. I, usually, write and publish a three to six thousand word chapter ever other day. In here, using the same level of description and detail that I use on FF.N, I can't even write two lines worth a dialogue without filling up the space.
Still, I feel there does need to be some context to surroundings. What do the surroundings around the characters look like? Where are they? On top of this, there are a few minor grammar issues, however, it's nothing major.
But, on the other hand, there are quite a few positives! For example: The dialog in this flows really well, and characters seem to speak as if they are genuinely talking, and not simply just getting the message that the author wants them to. Meaning, they have emotion to their words.
Even if this isn't the right one, I suppose I coudl post a review for it anyways. So, here you are. Now, I think I might head off to bed before I pass out from exhaustion. Kind of, sort of, been up since five in the morning until three in the morning.
Take Brave new world, for example. I, usually, write and publish a three to six thousand word chapter ever other day. In here, using the same level of description and detail that I use on FF.N, I can't even write two lines worth a dialogue without filling up the space.
Still, I feel there does need to be some context to surroundings. What do the surroundings around the characters look like? Where are they? On top of this, there are a few minor grammar issues, however, it's nothing major.
But, on the other hand, there are quite a few positives! For example: The dialog in this flows really well, and characters seem to speak as if they are genuinely talking, and not simply just getting the message that the author wants them to. Meaning, they have emotion to their words.
Even if this isn't the right one, I suppose I coudl post a review for it anyways. So, here you are. Now, I think I might head off to bed before I pass out from exhaustion. Kind of, sort of, been up since five in the morning until three in the morning.